Even ignoring the strange concept and fact that the model, actress Jennifer Lawrence, does not look like her normally pretty self, this is just a bad picture. Not only is the main subject right in the dead center, if one were to cut vertically right down the middle, there would be one busy picture and one picture with essentially nothing. To improve it, I would first move Lawrence out of the center, probably away from the birds, or at least crop out much of that blank wall. Then I would take it from a lower angle to add more depth. Third, I would either intensify the colors, or mute the colors more, possibly making it black and white, but how it looks now is just dull and not compelling.